I wrote 2 new poems this weekend. :) I hope they are enjoyed. :)
The Cult of the Facade
garish faces, gaudy clothes
dance along this running road
hide the truth and steal the soul
never let the colours show
cloaked and bloodied, knees unbent
all evade all element
never ask "is there a god"
in this cult of the facade
break it down and throw aside
all with which we try to hide
showing colours bleeding through
winning souls with what is true
Cars
spinning down the highway
purpose set in lines
captured in these massive beasts
roaring steel and light
each a single cosmos
holding in a world
speeding past the other ones
traffic's milling swirl
momentary eyes meet
worlds pause to a halt
questions start to race in minds
then we carry on
So I like the first one the best, but let me know what you think! :)
Sunday, January 25, 2009
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2 comments:
nice poems, but you need to add a verse about road rage :) Dad
Love it!!! the first one is kinda spooky but very good
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